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Tears of Despair
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 11:47:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Close my eyes as we cry
Touching my fingertips to your battered lips
An eternity of this is not enough
I have to withdraw to catch my fury
Departing into your passion for death
My first kiss of you was matted in blood
How you tasted so fine
You stare at me and cry
Your tears of despair
Darkness is all I have to offer
Raining in my mouth
The taste of your blood
Consumes me for eternity
Please do not leave
The fear tastes so good
Lapping at my own disguise
It does not matter if I die
I always will feel lament
Grief is my happiness
Sleeping in the rain
How I feel when I scream
Falling into the cave of despair
Give me your lips of blood
Wet my fingers in them
Kiss me tenderly
Take my blade and pierce my skin
Deeper and deeper
You thrust
Crying you drift away
I grab you but you run
I am alone again
A sudden quietness
I die alone once more
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williamdye
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Re: Tears of Despair
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by Mars on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 04:06:11 PM AEST
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| I though this was pretty interesting. Especially the last line. Well written, seems to flow well, at least for me. I'm not quite sure how to feel, but it still is a good write =). |
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Re: Tears of Despair
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:55:18 PM AEST
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Great write, very sad though
Hope you start to feel different but all the same I hope to read more soon
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Re: Tears of Despair
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 06:48:24 PM AEST
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well it's a dark but excellent write. the imagery is marvellous and it all flows so well. great work.
-phil |
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Re: Tears of Despair
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by ratty on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 07:08:04 PM AEST
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| Great written..... |
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