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Lawnmower In The Distance
Contributed by
Mars
on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:43:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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The fabric,
of my emotions is,
pierced by the wandering star,
on a cool night.
A cookie crumbles,
puddles splash, a child laughs.
But it's time to go home.
And so the Sun set.
Sunscreen,
A salty breeze, a rolling wave.
The seagull plays.
For a day that never ends.
Ice cream.
A creamy strawberry delight.
by the pool side.
Chlorine in the air.
A tree falls,
In a forest of mist.
A lawn mower in the distance.
The end of summer.
A tweet,
from the fall morning a bird,
upon a ray of sunshine.
My sunshine.
Copyright ©
Mars
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2008-12-12 17:43:47]
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Re: Lawnmower In The Distance
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:50:29 PM AEST
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Well this certainly is a vivid swirl of images to think about.
Some great lines in here
Steve |
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Re: Lawnmower In The Distance
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:52:53 PM AEST
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It's amazing how many different things can go through someones mind when they think
but all the same great write very abstract
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Lawnmower In The Distance
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 07:06:20 PM AEST
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an excellent write, the imagery and flow were both superb. you just described everything, which made it easier for the imagination. great work.
-phil |
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