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Pandora's Tears
Contributed by
karoody
on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 04:34:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Take your pain
Store it away
With my soul
It shall rest there
Guarding Pandora's world
Hiding her secret terrors away
From curious hearts
I cannot promise tomorrow
I cannot promise love
My only promise
To dry your tears
From a distance
My heart untouched for a reason
Do not question the secrets
With fires burning more furiously than Pele
Yet the power to make your blood run cold
As if you were in the grasps of Kheimon
Let my waters carry your troubles away
But never wait on the shore for too long
Or Pandora will surely reveal
Secrets that no one should have to see
Close your eyes
Walk away
I was only wiping a tear
Copyright ©
karoody
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2008-12-13 04:34:42]
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by navydocny on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 11:34:09 AM AEST
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Great writing as always!
Welcome back!
You've been missed....
Steve |
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by wizard on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 10:44:44 PM AEST
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great post!
always a pleasure to read your work,
wiz
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by venkat on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 05:31:14 AM AEST
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I feel your pulse beat..
no more words..
blessings and hugs my friend.
venkat
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 06:28:13 PM AEST
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a lovely, intelligent, fluid poem. i enjoyed reading it.
-phil |
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 09:53:50 PM AEST
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I like it great write and welcome back
it's good to get to read your writing again
as always great write and hope to read more
-kelly |
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 02:56:20 PM AEST
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Hmmm... quite interseting. Okay, so like, I don't quite understand it all lol...but it is definitely interesting.
Maybe this is a good time to say ebar hugs!!!
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by Sasha on
Wednesday, 18th November 2009 @ 07:12:39 PM AEST
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| Another truly touching poem.. |
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Re: Pandora's Tears
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 04:03:55 PM AEST
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The tittle is overwhelmingly beautiful
and touching, to say the least, as for
the piece it's self, but one word says
says the most, a " Masterpiece " . . .
thank you for your vist to my page,
deeply appreciated . . .
Ben . . .
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