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Lincoln Continental 72's Blues.
Contributed by
incognito_bombastus
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Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 04:40:19 AM in AEST
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Lincoln Continental 72's Blues.
Lincoln Continental 72's Blues.
I want to buy an American car
I want a big car,
I want to buy a lounge room.
I want some oversized, impractical
Token I can love.
I want to squeeze in six people in comfort,
A streetcar too big for your driveway.
I want a car that when it crashes
It will take out a whole suburban block.
I want to hear it,
I want Detroit to hear it.
I want a doof wagon
A car you can't stop.
A hot rod tractor
A car you have to double park.
Big & black & vulgar,
Sinister, with a C.D. stacker.
I want a car for happy motoring
For raves & hiways & bridges.
I want a conspicuous, vulgar
Opulently Rococo chrome,
Vinyl cheap, Airport west vehicle.
A tank with ****, muscle with a bustle.
Rubber with whitewall blubber,
A fool with obvious clown cool.
I want a car to war with.
The car, a car that makes me think,
That's an ultimate challenge
With an airy artificial ride.
I want a car that wins wars.
I want a car like a Coke bottle.
Like an angel.
Gliding & greased on blood,
A chariot that passes with the puff of Satan's black pipe smoke.
A stomach churning sacrilegious hearse.
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2008-12-13 04:40:19]
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Re: Lincoln Continental 72's Blues.
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by Spike on
Saturday, 13th December 2008 @ 06:33:20 PM AEST
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...and two miles to the gallon - yeah!! 5/5
A most excellent detailing of exorbitant, plebeian desire. Great read; it just kept rolling on like one of those oversized land boats, with a pitching and a yawing and a stacatto pace like a granny with one foot on the brake and the other on the accelerator.
Carbon free road restraint
may mark you as a saint,
but the motor indulgent are
high-beam effulgent Brmmmm!!
See you on the back roads.
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Re: Lincoln Continental 72's Blues.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th December 2008 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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a funny, brash write. i liked how you dared to go against the greens and say what you think. great work once again.
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Re: Lincoln Continental 72's Blues.
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 11:18:21 PM AEST
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Brings back many meomeries.
Awesome writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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