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One more turn
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 01:29:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Cyclin down the countryside
Down this long winding highway.
Staring out the rear view mirror
The past disappears, the lines fade away.
The hurt is always with me
No matter how fast I drive
I guess its along with the ride,
I just cant seem to out run this life.
Out in front of me , through the windshield
Are the meadows the greener fields.
The fences that everyone talks about,
The ones I dream of, Day in and day out.
But here I am, stuck in drive,
My foot in the gas, Parked in the present
Just waiting for another road to arrive.
Someday I will be able to drive that way,
My life has always been just one sign away.
Hands on the steering wheel
Knuckles down,
I know Im Just one more turn
From turning this around.
Im not going to be beaten
Off the beaten track
Luggage rack on top
never going to look back.
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Recyclebin
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2008-12-15 01:29:18]
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Re: One more turn
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by karoody on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 03:10:08 AM AEST
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Bin~
thank you my dear friend. your words are too true, and the poem is wonderful. i appreciate you, i truly do. get in touch sometime. miss ya.
hugs smiles blessings
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Re: One more turn
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by shelby on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 05:42:35 PM AEST
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Bin,
I loved this write. You captured such feeling within the verse.
I have learned..... I can get into this big rig and leave.
Make people watch the tail lights go.
But I have also learned that the leaving doesn't erase the troubles cause they come with a person.
Best thing to do, leave when ya need to. Leave people when you need to. Forget about it, end the turmoil and drama and move on.
Sorry I am on a journey myself right now.
Michelle
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Re: One more turn
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by Teal3545 on
Monday, 15th December 2008 @ 08:52:48 PM AEST
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Your poem is so true.
I love how you capture this picture, but also with so much emotion that happens with so many people. |
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