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A final Goodbye
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
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Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 01:11:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I Gaze into a bloodstained sky
i hear a distant muffled cry
i take a breath i sigh
the unclean barren streets
an eerie early twilight illuminates
the world gripped in winters lifeless stranglehold
light that dance and plays over a water rainbow
The shimmers that waltz over a frozen meadow
the trees encased in early husks
a hazy bitter mist coats the ground
the chill of a winter breeze
intoxicating petrol fumes
the air now a breathless poison
the depths of pain and sorrow fill the room
the flutter of wings above
pain hidden in hands
the guiltless tears flow
the flowers neatly presented
a gentle hush falls
a silence falls upon the mourners
the preist calmly approaches
the birds do sing a comforting lullaby
i ask myself WHY
A Final Goodbye
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2008-12-16 13:11:11]
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Re: A final Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 11:53:15 AM AEST
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yes, i felt the same when my grandma died. i always asked the question WHY. noone ever answered. a superb poem, however.
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