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Toxic Love
Contributed by
undead_poet14
on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Youre poison to my soul
The deadly sting of a snake
There is no escape
From your toxic love
The sweet smile
Covers the inner evil
And anger within you
Your love is full of hatred and betrayal
Beware their charming gaze
Those baby blues burn with fire
Hidden in his sleek blonde hair
Are the horns of a demon
Once you take that first step
You are lost
Youre just begging for heartbreak
Dont say I didnt tell you so
Once their done
Theyll toss you aside
Like the toy youd chosen to be
Just hope theyll leave a shred of your heart left
Beware the toxic love
Of that demon in disguise
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2003-03-21 19:05:00]
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Re: Toxic Love
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:18:51 PM AEST
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| Uhg, I know that feeling, good poem. |
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Re: Toxic Love
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by ThirtyDays on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 07:54:02 PM AEST
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This is prophetic,
" Once you take that first step
You are lost "
Yes Yes.. we all love getting lost.. and we never know what we'll find.. but we keep on.. hoping for the best.. or making the best.
Excellent work.. i loved it. |
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Re: Toxic Love
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by theangelestdevil on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 08:18:07 PM AEST
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| i luv ur poem and i know the kind of demons u r talkin about. |
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Re: Toxic Love
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:52:07 PM AEST
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very good write i have met a few of those demons
Sharon |
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Re: Toxic Love
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 09:53:01 PM AEST
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very good write i have met a few of those demons
Sharon |
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Re: Toxic Love
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 01:57:34 AM AEST
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oh so good I have met some of those girls! I liked this I loved the anger in it. Very well put together.
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Re: Toxic Love
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:29:34 AM AEST
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True, true, true, and you are so right. They are demons camoflaughed in man's form! I tried to live with one, and nearly ended up being killed by him.
This poem is so true. Listen up everyone...they exist, maybe they have different titles, but they are all the same behind closed doors. They can be very very dangerous.
I loved your words, and the way you put them together.
Wonderful poem!
lovingcritters
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