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Contributed by
jillian_phan
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 12:37:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Havent been the same
Putting on a front
For what exactly?
Barely living
Lost hope
Stressing over nothing
Too little time
Too much time
Whats the solution?
When everything is in its place
Even when it all seems in disarray
Wheres the resolution?
Just as simple as breath in breath out
Cant even focus on the ins or the outs
Do I really need a time out?
Down one way is a wall
Down another is a hall
Face to the front is a door...
closed.
Turn about to a window
closed.
If there is a light,
I cant seem to find it.
Am I not looking?
Copyright ©
jillian_phan
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2008-12-17 12:37:28]
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Re: [?]
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 04:32:29 AM AEST
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you describe the feeling of being trapped so well. great poem.
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