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Homeless Agony
Contributed by
FORDIE
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Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 02:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I`m a victim of my own calamity,
and life's hittin hard like puns in a jokers parody
Before raidin' trash receptacles,
lived a man with cash, respectable & owned a family,
In a home with balconies,
but, that's just nostalgie now, as I reflect to cope with tragedy,
As I come to, I scope the canopy,
browsing beggars/ buddies in a homeless agony,
I lie beaten n broke in a bed of broken bottles, and all that my face show's is apathy,
'Cos, I focus happily on good times past, and cast a dream to return to that hopeless fantasy
Copyright ©
FORDIE
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2008-12-17 14:37:51]
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Re: Homeless Agony
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 04:39:20 AM AEST
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i loved the rhyme scheme and layout. great work.
-phil |
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Re: Homeless Agony
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by FORDIE on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 09:43:23 AM AEST
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| Thanks for your feedback phil, much appreciated. |
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