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I am only human
Contributed by
Loende
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Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 08:55:31 PM in AEST
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I am only human, as if you really care.
You just want to hurt me, so much more than I can bear.
You expect me to better than I really am,
and then youre shocked when I am not,
so the pain it comes again.
I am only human, as if it makes a difference,
You just want to blame me and the truth s of no importance.
You depend on my forgiveness, expect it to be yours
and then youre drawn back to my side,
so the lies begin again.
I am only human, as flawed as I can be.
You just want to own me, but not so that theyll see.
You expect me to accept this and not to speak my mind,
and then youre shocked when I speak out,
so you disappear again.
I am only human, as if youve even checked
You just want to come and go, and give me no respect.
You depend on my emotions to make things go your way,
but youll be shocked when Im not there,
so here we go again.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2008-12-17 20:55:31]
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Re: I am only human
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 09:15:05 PM AEST
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Wow, the reader can really feel the anger in this one. I can soooo relate and have been there a time or twelve. I like the poem and you have captured the moment...the emotion...but you absolutely do not deserve whatever this is that's happening to you. Well, I am of course assuming it's based on your anger and something that's happening to you. I have seen your forum posts and comments. You do not deserve this. Unfortunately, there are people like that in this world. I hope things get better for you.
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Re: I am only human
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 05:36:08 AM AEST
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another superb write, dawn. you've pointed out our failures as a species. we need each other, but are really waiting for the first opportunity to stab each other in the back, and run away. 'sigh'. i wonder what it's like being a racoon? i'm sure its an easier life.
-phil |
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Re: I am only human
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by Mars on
Thursday, 18th December 2008 @ 09:54:01 PM AEST
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| I couldn't have said how I feel better than phil did. It is, especially in the world we live in, so true. Often it has happened to me. I trust someone, they back-stab me (figuratively), I shun them, and then they come back so they can do it all over again. This really embodies the nature of our society sometimes. Great job =). |
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Re: I am only human
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by HERO on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 11:46:27 AM AEST
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| It's stuff like this that really puts today's social society in perspective. It's like survival of the fittest has evolved. Emotional pain is just as scarring as physical pain. |
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Re: I am only human
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:10:06 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent poem. I can relate but mostly its because i feel that people will only like me if I am perfect which I will never be. Great poem! |
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Re: I am only human
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by Recyclebin on
Saturday, 14th March 2009 @ 10:33:31 PM AEST
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Wow... this is some deep writing.
I loved the way you weaved this piece.
What about people like me who are part animal?
*Smiles*
~Bin~ |
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