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The Cross
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 04:15:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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By my town is a cross on a hill
To think of it now, makes my heart be still
Lit at night, it shines so true
Yes another thing that reminds me of you
I see a girl riding by, in the back of a car
Long time ago and so very far
She gazes upon its very glare
Wondering where her love can be out there
This time of year again and again
The story always plays out in my brain
There was a time that I was your one
The one whod be your shining sun
Now years after where weve been
What do you think of if you see it when
Driving by on a starry night
Its divine sparkle by electric light
Do your thoughts return to that little girls dream?
Of where is your love, and what lifes scheme
Do you look upon it with little girls eyes
And wonder if its all worth a grand revise
At least you should know when its there that you stare
Theres a love for you that is always foursquare
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Re: The Cross
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 06:10:06 AM AEST
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Good work, my friend.
Stay safe.
Hope you get your hearts desire for Christmas.
Huggs, blessings, saftey,
emy |
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Re: The Cross
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 01:29:08 PM AEST
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superb write. the imagery was top class, it flowed well, it was a joy to read. great work.
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Re: The Cross
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 08:06:31 PM AEST
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Steve,
this is an incredible write.
Vivid and full of wonder and dreaming.
A bit of bitter sweet mixed in.
I mirror Em I hope you get your wish for Christmas.
Be safe and warm
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Michelle |
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Re: The Cross
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by Loende on
Friday, 19th December 2008 @ 11:41:11 PM AEST
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Steve, this is exquisite. Absolutely breathtaking. If I close my eyes, I can almost see that cross on a hill. May this be your beacon and keep you strong.
Be well,
~dawn |
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