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Vampire Tears
Contributed by
Jayne49
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Saturday, 20th December 2008 @ 09:23:35 PM in AEST
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Have you ever heard a vampire cry
while the dew is still upon?
And all the world is a lingering gray
right before the dawn?
Have you ever heard his sad weeping
over the evil life hes led?
With escaping sobs declaring
Hes sorry hes undead?
Have you ever heard him beg to be
forgiven of his last embrace?
Or ask that someone take a stake
then end his life of disgrace?
If you hear crying in the dark
and it chills you to the core.
I suggest you find a cross
A good precaution for
Vampires never really cry!
Copyright ©
Jayne49
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2008-12-20 21:23:35]
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Re: Vampire Tears
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by Voyager on
Friday, 29th November 2013 @ 12:54:16 PM AEST
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A well written poem. Has a sense of dread mystique to it and a haunting feeling. a good delineation of a 'typal' being such as the vampire which isn't evolutionary unlike man who is and therefore is self-satisfied in its own perfection (within limits of course) and does not display remorse or regret or rectitude.
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