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Cheating-Her Story
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 02:16:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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He had strong arms
and I felt them
wrapping around my soul;
and his voice
soft
beautiful
penetrating me.
He listened to me
he talked to me
and the sex
was
really my thank you
to him for
caring about my being lonely.
At least this was
the reason for the sex
the first time
But the shock of it
was it felt different
creating
a dilemma.
I was looking for
a cure for lonely
and he
introduced me
me to sexual need.
That was not
supposed to be
in the equation.
Cheating for me
had been propelled
by a lacking
in my current relationship
and stumbling forward
I realized lonely
has more dimensions
than I counted on
To continue
now is to rent my soul
between my needs
and the marrige I've built
and the children
who are my everything.
So my soul
sits the fence
torn between
eternity,
heaven,
love,
marriage,
sex
and need.
Copyright ©
lnnie
... [
2008-12-21 02:16:30]
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Re: Cheating-Her Story
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 03:03:20 AM AEST
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what a messy dilemma. i would only say that lust gives you gratification in abundence now, but disappointment later. but maybe i'm just old-fashioned ( can you be old-fashioned at the age of 19?). i thought the poem itself was in the mould of 'the making it up', which you know that i enjoyed. it was lusty, bold and brash. a dynamite combination.
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Re: Cheating-Her Story
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by mariahneu1 on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 09:31:07 PM AEST
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| Ouch... I can relate in some ways. I like the choppiness and the good description. Nice imagery... |
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