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The Past, the Present, The Future
Contributed by
talcobra
on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 01:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about the past
About how wonderful my life was
How happy you made me
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about the present
About how depressing my life is
How sad you have made me
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about you
About how beautiful you are
How you are simply everything I could ask for
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about the future
About how amazing our lives would be
How madly in love we would be
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about reality
About how I will never have you
How you will never be mine
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about you
About how unhappy youve made me
How I will never forget you
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about my feelings
About how strong these feelings are
How they just wont go away
As I sit here I get to thinking
I get to thinking about everything
About what you did to me
How heartbroken youve made me
And I suddenly realize
You never cared
-Tre
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2008-12-21 13:29:22]
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Re: The Past, the Present, The Future
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by razorbladekisses on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 04:17:17 AM AEST
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I like the repetition in this...
I'm sorry to hear about this, that this person left you heart broken. If you don't mind me asking, were you in love?
This is good. I really like the ending.
I hope everything is well.
-Jessi. |
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Re: The Past, the Present, The Future
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:35:19 PM AEST
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| I love the emotion conveyed...Wonderful job here |
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