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the last words
Contributed by
spooky
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Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 07:10:48 PM in AEST
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the last word i had said to her,,,
I love you, as I hung up the phone,
i wanted to say more,
but my heart wouldn't let me,
we shared a dreams,
we shared laughter,
we even shared tears,
i wanted to say more,
but would it have made a diffrence,no,
so know i sit and write alone,
and wonder if she will think of me again,
for she will always be there in my heart,
for the last words i said to her,
and i hope she believed me,
when i said I LOVE YOU,,
craig s. meeks
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Re: the last words
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by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 22nd December 2008 @ 11:05:48 PM AEST
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Awwww, in the words you have said, you have expressed lifetimes of love and emotion. Take Care.
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Re: the last words
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:36:25 PM AEST
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tragic, but beautiful. you expressed yourself with passion and eloquence. i loved the ending, great work.
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Re: the last words
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:33:50 PM AEST
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I very much enjoyed reading this.
You did an excellent job. Well done.
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Re: the last words
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by Almostheaven4u on
Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 08:46:41 PM AEST
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| She believes and will always be thinking of you! |
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