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Tremble Melt And Flow
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:34:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am on my knees
all night long
you got what I need
and
what I want,
I am so in love
you are the one I adore...
it's
so beautiful.
Rainbows of sensation
explode
whenever I am with you,
In slow motion
we pause
as we are
trembling and melting
on a bed of roses...
then something happens
an emotional crescendo
as love flows.
I softly sigh
as I am dream of you
spreading your angel wings
saving me
and giving me love.
you got it
I want it
I need it
give it to me
I gotta have it all,
I am in so love
and it is so
Beautiful.
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unknown_utopia
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2008-12-23 01:34:24]
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Re: Tremble Melt And Flow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:57:24 PM AEST
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stunning writing. the flow was perfection and the imagery was marvellous. you've used some beautiful language in this wonderful piece. the second stanza was one of the finest i have ever read, and i've read a lot of poems. superb work.
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Re: Tremble Melt And Flow
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 05:26:09 PM AEST
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| i love this work of art for and by love.this has made the day. |
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