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Stretch Out Your Hands And Catch The Current
Contributed by
catz77
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 01:39:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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All that falls
Within these walls
belong to one
So sinister, so powerful,
So plain
Thin walls
Towering high
Letting out a sigh
Sending chills
Through my veins
All that fall
Will do so
Continuously
Through levels
Of ash
Through piles
Of thought
We will fall
Consistently
Until these walls
Collapse and
Evil is vanquished
Some falling objects will fly
While others may die
.
Copyright ©
catz77
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2008-12-23 01:39:08]
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Re: Stretch Out Your Hands And Catch The Current
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 12:59:57 PM AEST
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it had a nice flow to it and a great structure. good work.
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