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Save Me
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 02:25:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Holding it all in
Keeping it buried inside
Never to unfold
Upon another's life
I never meant to hurt you
I didn't think I could
Now I am learning
That I always would
Hurting you is not normal
I don't made it my plan
And what hurts the most
Is how you don't understand
In this corner I lie
Alone and in the dark
Because life has hit me hard
And left its eternal mark
So tell my you are okay
Tell me you understand
Come back to me
And again hold my hand
Am I too late
Is it to late to try
Is all I have left
The will to cry
I don't try to hurt you
It just happens that way
So please, forgive me and come back
To forever stay
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2008-12-23 14:25:47]
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Re: Save Me
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by SilverRain on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:39:01 PM AEST
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| Keep hope when all else seems lost, lovely write. |
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Re: Save Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:16:51 PM AEST
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great structure. it flowed really well. nice write.
-phil |
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