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Misty Windows
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 03:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Misty windows
As our faces near
And passion flares out of control
Safe in your hands
No inhibitions
I loose total control
No keeping back
Just letting go
Our bodies move together
Hands searching,
Grabbing, holding,
Exploring, finding
Mouths hungry
Just letting go
Passion like this
Only persist
Where real love exists
Like ours
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-12-23 15:29:12]
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Re: Misty Windows
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:45:04 PM AEST
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A touching little piece here. I am sure many can relate to this type of passion.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: Misty Windows
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by PreciousKitten on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 04:58:30 PM AEST
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| i really like this one.keep on. |
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Re: Misty Windows
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 05:24:30 PM AEST
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Wow...
This one grabs and doesn't let go.
Alive and raw emotions.
Very well expressed and great flow!
~~Oceandreamer~~
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Re: Misty Windows
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2008 @ 06:26:13 PM AEST
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lusty imagery, i loved it!
-phil |
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Re: Misty Windows
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by Spike on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 07:56:13 AM AEST
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Tightly composed, passionate kudos to the sustained lust of true love. Well done (gave me a little jump in my seat...)
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Re: Misty Windows
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 09:41:46 PM AEST
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| Very passionate and sensual imagery. Methinks it is like...wow...really takes the reader to the moment you have captured here. |
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