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perfection
Contributed by
wil_ca
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I need a girl that's real
one who understands me and knows how i feel
Im not lookin for some breezie thats fake
I need someone who isnt full of air and can keep me awake
I need a girl with flowing long beautiful brown hair
shes got gorgeous brown eyes and no one can compare
I need a girl who loves the stars and the moon
and she loves to sleep in, till about noon
I need a girl to be my queen
that dosent have her head up in the clouds, if you know what i mean
yea...she'll hug me and be my shoulder, if i cry
a lifelong friend....my true love....untill the day that i die
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2003-03-22 00:25:00]
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Re: perfection
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by venkat on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:53:47 AM AEST
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| It is ver y fine. good luck, venkat |
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Re: perfection
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by shelby on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 01:34:24 PM AEST
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You will find her. Beautiful poem!!
Michelle |
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Re: perfection
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:08:29 AM AEST
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| keep dreaming and the best of luck |
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Re: perfection
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by Funnygrl_03 on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 12:17:01 AM AEST
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| That is such a cute poem. I hope that you find ur gurl. good luck with ur writting |
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