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Upon the ground
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:13:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I laid upon the ground,
flat, and silent as I could muster.
The world brought colors, and cold,
warmth and need.
Stood in darken hallways un-spoken,
drank when no one about.
maybe I have a lesser God
and more moral,
or is it the other way around.
But I have come to "everything and fell..
laying flat upon the ground.. Vincent
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crow
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2008-12-27 11:13:03]
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Re: Upon the ground
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 01:37:02 PM AEST
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some nice imagery, an enjoyable read, especially the opening stanza.
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Re: Upon the ground
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by karoody on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 04:39:00 PM AEST
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i truly enjoyed this write from you
you really got my thoughts racing
thinking about those moments
when we realize just what
it is all about, and what kind of
entity may be watching us
love smiles and best of my blessings
always
kara |
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Re: Upon the ground
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by shelby on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:10:09 PM AEST
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Ah my friend am glad you posted this. I told you lastnight and shall tell you once more there is so much depth in this. Just remember..... not so much thinking on it. All will be fine!
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Michelle |
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