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My Destiny
Contributed by
RavenShadows
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Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 01:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You said you loved me once
Underneath the falling snow
This is my destiny
To spend my life alone
You say I cause such misery
In the lives of those I love
A dark enchanted angel
Fallen from the gods above
This is my destiny
Scream to the world to set me free
My sins just tarnish me
Im alone in this world
Tears fall from my eyes
No one to wipe them away
Loneliness is my demise
Why did you have to go away
Oh the pain
How my heart bleeds
Torn to shreds
This is my reverie
One wish just hold me close
Your warm breath on my neck
Hold me close kiss me please
I just dont want to be alone
This is my destiny
Scream at the world to set me free
My sins tarnish me
All alone in this world
This is my destiny
Loneliness calls to me
Darkness falls over me
So alone lost in this world
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Re: My Destiny
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:40:22 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this. i mean it is a sad write, but it is so easy and smooth to read. you've used some great language as well, notably 'reverie' which i particularly liked (i do have a fondness for borrowed french words). overall, a great write.
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Re: My Destiny
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by karoody on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 02:37:18 AM AEST
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i enjoyed the flow you put to this
your choice of repetition
helped bring those emotions home
i look forward to reading more from you
smiles
kara
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