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Silence and Ash
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 07:45:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I met someone today,
with no hearing..
She placed Her hand upon My guitar,
a hand at my throat.
She smiled at the silly songs,
and as I went on steadied Her touch.
Though sorrow floats between hand and Souls
there is no mourning.
She understood, as it came to and end...
tomorrow`s silence, and ash...Vincent
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crow
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2008-12-27 19:45:43]
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Re: Silence and Ash
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by shelby on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:11:26 PM AEST
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I saw this unfold while reading. Strong and powerful write my friend.
Loves you
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Re: Silence and Ash
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by karoody on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 01:40:53 AM AEST
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i loved this write from you
a wonderful picture it drew on my heart
smiles to you my friend
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Re: Silence and Ash
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 04:00:33 AM AEST
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Mysterious,intriguing and as always....moving.
Good to hear your voice again.
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Re: Silence and Ash
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 06:29:08 PM AEST
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superb work, great imagery vincent.
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Re: Silence and Ash
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 10:47:59 PM AEST
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Ya know? I think this is just really soooo cool. I remember quite a few years ago going to a concert and this guy's wife was/is deaf. This really made me think of her and how cool it is that they too can listen to the music. Thank you.
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