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If I...
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
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Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 08:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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if i had one wish
i would change the world for the better
if i was a mom
i would give my everything for my children
if i was growing up
i would need some advice along the way
if i was a father
i would be a man for my kids
if i was a boy
i would be better than the last
if i was a celebrity
i would be less embarssing in public
if i were a superhero
i would save as many people as i could
i wasn't human....
i wouldn't be writing this poem
for any reason
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PreciousKitten
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2008-12-27 20:55:47]
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Re: If I...
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by spooky on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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so much we want in life to make it better,,reguardless of who we are we still can make a better world,,
a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: If I...
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:57:59 PM AEST
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i wasn't human....
i wouldn't be writing this poem
for any reason
These last three lines are very powerfull.
Very creative writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: If I...
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by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 12:07:35 AM AEST
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Very nice outlook the poem gives. Good Job!
-Butterfly |
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Re: If I...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 06:34:39 AM AEST
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good work, very inciteful and poignant.
-phil |
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Re: If I...
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 09:15:53 PM AEST
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If I
hadn't read this
I wouldn't know how precious you are. |
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