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Pure Spanish Safflower
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:10:50 PM in AEST
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If all my memories had taste
mine would be strong,
semi sweet
chocolate.
If your lips had flavor
they'd be honey dewed
.
Your skin is sweet basil
with cinnamon
with a pinch of salty taste.
Those eyes are melon sweet.
Ive tasted a lot of you.
And you I.
These are our secret
secrets
our cuisine.
You used to suck my fingers
making them tingle
In your warm mouth;
your tongue tugging away
at each finger sweetened.
My nail polish blushes.
.
Your massages still heal
and your palm in the small of my back
remains the perfect fit.
These arethe tastes of our lives.
We sample banquets
eat, drink
and feast even.
Tonite herewith
is my toast to you, my sweet
pure Spanish safflower
from my lips to yours
all sweeten ed
by our history.
Copyright ©
lnnie
... [
2008-12-27 23:10:50]
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Re: Pure Spanish Safflower
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 11:31:52 PM AEST
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This is beautifull.
It reminds me of The Songs Of Solomon in the bible.
Awesome writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Pure Spanish Safflower
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by karoody on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 12:45:41 AM AEST
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i thoroughly enjoyed this
beautifully written
sweet and romantic with
the perfect amount of sentiment
always a pleasure to read your work
smiles and blessings to you and yours
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Re: Pure Spanish Safflower
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 06:39:48 AM AEST
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a quite beautiful write, the imagery was at times erotic (which always goes down well) and at times romantic. very creative, nice work.
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Re: Pure Spanish Safflower
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by kye on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 12:37:26 PM AEST
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Filled with passion, erotic imagery, sensory perception, and all the little things that make mutual attraction an envious thought.
Ahhhh romance.....
I wish it had been longer because I would have gladly kept reading.
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