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Infinite
Contributed by
anomalei
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Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 01:38:56 PM in AEST
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absolutely
i might be crazy now
give me something to stay awake for
i can't stand my dreams
in one singular moment
of brilliant truth
you now say you'd rather
retreat to darkness
things like that you can't take back
once spoken,
words like that always become historical
held against you forever.
holding tongue,
letting saliva dissolve your words
something i've never done well
and only getting worse
i don't know what i'm supposed to do
with these fragments of the past
shards of this only cut deeper and deeper
this pain is only dulled, not lessened
enduring
thoughts like this don't leave my mind
i need to leave this place,
just to breathe for awhile
to keep living
i only need one moment,
to be
Infinite.
Copyright ©
anomalei
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2008-12-28 13:38:56]
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Re: Infinite
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 07:04:15 AM AEST
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great work, your imagery was very good indeed. i particularly enjoyed this bit:
holding tongue,
letting saliva dissolve your words
something i've never done well
and only getting worse
superb.
-phil |
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Re: Infinite
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by lnnie on
Monday, 29th December 2008 @ 02:51:21 PM AEST
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I echo phil
great, great writing |
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