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Almost said 'good bye'
Contributed by
Anaztasia
on
Tuesday, 30th December 2008 @ 11:45:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I never thought the day would come
Although sometimes I wished it did
Your eyes stare far
Your thoughts go farther
Thinker of my life, indeed...
I don't really know
Why I'm so afraid
Of you loosing you...
Perhaps, because you are my friend
And everything you do
And did have changed my life forever.
Without you
I cannot imagine being
In the crowd full of strangers,
They are like hungry wolves,
Every single moment
IS a lifetime
And Im afraid of everything that moves.
Last night it was so close
I thought I will forever loose
The only man I've ever loved
My sweet desire, an excuse
To ran away from those
Who think they are unloved
By me.
Oh God I wouldn't live another day
If you were gone away
Kissing on another girl's lips
Telling her how beautiful she is...
I know there are a lot of girls
That wouldn't mind to become a fan
Of yours, my gentleman...
And move a hand through your rough curls.
...
One last kiss before we say good night
One last hug before you'll turn off the light
One more time to say "I love you"
Before forgetting fight we went though.
Copyright ©
Anaztasia
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2008-12-30 23:45:16]
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Re: Almost said 'good bye'
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:40:17 AM AEST
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sad, but i think it flowed very well. i liked this bit:
I know there are a lot of girls
That wouldn't mind to become a fan
Of yours, my gentleman...
And move a hand through your rough curls.
i think it worked very well.
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Re: Almost said 'good bye'
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by lidachur on
Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 03:23:30 PM AEST
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