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as the soft wind blows
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 08:00:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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On the side of a hill
By where the river flows
I dream of her face
As the soft wind blows
I gaze at the sky
My mind not quite clear
I hear her voice call
Look up, no one here
I lay down to sleep
I see her by the door
Im loosing my mind
As it haunts even more
Every day on the hill
By where the river flows
I cry for her touch
As the soft wind blows
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2009-01-03 08:00:30]
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Re: as the soft wind blows
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by MarcusLane on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 10:13:58 AM AEST
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| Simplicity rules! I can imagine this as a folk song accompanied by an acoustic guitar. |
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Re: as the soft wind blows
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by Crow on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:29:25 PM AEST
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| I could let this go without a comment..very nice work, its bare, and "clean and a pleasure to read. Vincent |
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Re: as the soft wind blows
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by Crow on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:29:25 PM AEST
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| I could let this go without a comment..very nice work, its bare, and "clean and a pleasure to read. Vincent |
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Re: as the soft wind blows
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 10:53:47 PM AEST
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| This is so Kool. |
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