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Knot
Contributed by
lnnie
on
Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 01:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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She was my lady
not;
She was my friend
not;
I reached out to her
she reached out to me
not;
she wasn't interested in me
not, not;
My roommate and she
were seeing each other
not not,
My stomach
knots.
Time to move on
not not;
Finishing this poem;
all tied in;
knots.
Copyright ©
lnnie
... [
2009-01-03 13:08:01]
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Re: Knot
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 06:13:48 PM AEST
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very creative, very original. i liked it a lot. the ending made it all fit together perfectly.
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