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To YOU.+
Contributed by
Anaztasia
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Saturday, 3rd January 2009 @ 10:30:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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To my father
I remember, dad,
All the things youve said,
And all the things youve taught me
Will never be forgotten
Your life has ended early
But please, my dad, dont worry
I will not let you down
Your name I will renown.
To my mom
This day is more than just a day.
I understand youre sad.
Youve lost the dearest man today
Your husband and my dad
Please, know, youre not alone.
We all are full of sorrow
Well help to carry stone
Today and live again tomorrow
We, all that lost a friend,
A son, a brother, father
And you, my mother
That lost a husband of more than 20 years,
Must let come out all of our tears
And then remember to move on;
Although, my dad is gone
He is still here, in our hearts
Because it is where love first starts
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Anaztasia
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2009-01-03 22:30:04]
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Re: To YOU.+
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by emystar on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:12:43 AM AEST
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First I wonna say I know what it feels like to loose both parents. I'm so sorry for your loss to all.
One can feel the pain and luv in this write. I know your Dad is watching over your shoulder.
He is really proud of you and this wise write not only to your Dad but understanding your Mother's loss.
Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
I look forward to reading your other writes reading the rest of your writes.
Luv, huggs, blessings, healing, strength,
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Re: To YOU.+
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by Loende on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 12:25:37 AM AEST
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"Because it is where love first starts."
What a beautiful line in a lovely and heartfelt piece. You've written a touching tribute to two wonderful lives that came together and now have to be parted. I hope you can find comfort in the knowledge that they will be reunited. Love that strong will always endure. May you have Faith and be strong during these trying days. I have no doubt that your Father was very proud of you.
Be well,
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