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who I had become,,
Contributed by
spooky
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Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 11:33:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've looked into the mirror,
I felt that i knew you,
I thought that you were someone that i wanted to be,
or someone that I wanted to know,
but know i see another person,
who looks at me,
this is someone that i know now,
not as before,
but a better person than what i was,
i see someone that I could be proud of being,
i see a person who i want to be like,
i see a person who had struggled through life,
and accomplished his dreams,
our past lifes are not the people we want to be as,
we see our lifes in a different way,
we grew up from children to adults,
and i am happy for who and what i had become.
I had become a better person to others,
i had respect for those who try,
and those who are not able,
I'am the person who i want to be now,
I look into the mirror,
and I see the person who i am now,
someone who respects the words of the wise,
someone who looks for the future of the children,
for they are our future,
I hope that they look into the mirror,
and see the things that will make them happy in life,
not as i seen in mine,
i look into the mirror and i can see tomorrow,,
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2009-01-04 11:33:35]
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Re: who I had become,,
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 01:51:34 PM AEST
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this is an interesting write and i am sure many of us have considered this point of view at some time.
i liked some of the phrases you used. i especially liked how you ended it with tht last stanza.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: who I had become,,
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 06:03:27 PM AEST
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yes, an interesting write. the ending was very good indeed.
-phil |
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