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NO MORE
Contributed by
THEFORGOTTENSOUL
on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 07:58:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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he lies to save himself from the truth runs away from things that are too hard sleeps to forget he is so very much alive holds in his tears to say he is a man hides in the dark so you wont see him cuts himself to forget about all his pain throws away true love because he was scared drinks to get away from all his mistakes why dont you be a real man tell the truth to save me from my death run after me not away from me to help me live happy wake up cause boy you are so very much alive and hurt cry to let everything out not all kept bundled up come out of the dark and show me you truly care i will heal your heart you just have to let me hold on to me as best you can:i love u deeply stop with the beer and face reality hurting yourself will only hurt me too oh gosh if only you knew
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Re: NO MORE
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 4th January 2009 @ 09:43:12 PM AEST (User
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Very beautiful, powerful, amazing write.
Quite a work of art that came inner pain.
A master peice of wisdom.
huggs, blessings, peace,
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Re: NO MORE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Butterflyperfect on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 04:08:05 PM AEST (User
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Very powerful. It doesn't have to rhyme to be a masterpiece.
Take Care,
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