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i looked
Contributed by
sidra
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Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 02:23:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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looked for you this morning,
I looked for you last night,
I looked for you everywhere,
But you were not in sight.
I looked up to the night sky above,
And saw your face in the stars.
It was then I realized,
Youre not here anymore
But youll always be with me..
You will always be in my heart.
Life is something all of us must borrow
Returning it in time, to whence it came.
Good-bye doesnt mean youre gone,
So long as I still love you,
Your memory will live on.
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sidra
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2009-01-05 02:23:32]
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Re: i looked
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by gmcse8 on
Monday, 5th January 2009 @ 10:26:11 AM AEST
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| it is obvious to even the most casual reader that you have suffered a great loss. Your poem reflects that and is beautiful. The second half of the poem I really thought was wonderful, although a few lines in the first half seemed to stick with me too. It is difficult to deal with, and trust me I know. I lost my little brother on Christmas Eve just past. I have a friend who posts poems on here, her name is Little_genna. She wrote a poem about losing a stepfather under very different circumstances. It was called "To the man I never thought would leave." I went back and read her poem and compared it to yours. It was an interesting comparison. Time heals all wounds is not just a quote, it really does. Bless you. |
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