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The Last Seconds On Earth
Contributed by
irisheyes09
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Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 09:05:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I open my eyes and hear a faint voice
All i make out is "we have no other choice"
I slowy wake up and listen once more
Then i hear "end", "this time for sure".
I jump out of bed with awe and surprise
The fear creeps inside me it shows in my eyes
I turn on tv to see if its true
Everythings blank i havent a clue.
I rush to the street to try find out there
Not one person walking and no birds in the air
Am i alone without any help
Should i start screaming or whimper a yelp.
I look to my right my body stands still
Transfixed on this object its making me ill
Then i think "god" "maybe im dead"?
So little ive seen So much thats unsaid.
The sky gets darker every second i stare
No one to stop it no one to care
The objects upon me i let out a cry
"Thank you god for the gift of life"i bid you goodbye.
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irisheyes09
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2009-01-08 09:05:33]
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Re: The Last Seconds On Earth
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 12:12:45 PM AEST
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a different subject from the normal, i liked your originality. it was an interesting story that kept me gripped until the end. great work.
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Re: The Last Seconds On Earth
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 09:18:26 PM AEST
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Yup, pretty good there. I found myself transfixed to it until that bewildering end. :-( That's sad and even though fictional, it definitely makes one think.
Thanks and take care,
Tim |
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