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Nice Guy Hurt
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 12:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Seeing through you was as clear as water, the formula was polluted
With less hydrogen and oxygen and more deceit that is carbonated
When this particle is swallowed like our waste disposal sewage
You have taken the benefit of the kindness and now I am poisoned
The only treatment is to drain you out, my way of releasing this bad liquid
I have this publicized exposing your kind, now you are filtered
to feel affection was like a manufactured automobile engine
when the passion is pumping in and out so is my cylinder pistons
the burning desire builds up as if we were in a combustion
the flames were sheltered due to unsteady balance of betrayal
as it was hard to turn like my crankshaft lost its leverage
as I was once a nice guy, currently overheated without the vengeance,
I could take no more of this pain, my engine has exploded
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Re: Nice Guy Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:45:52 PM AEST
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a very intelligent write. you elaborated so well on your metaphors. it was so well constructed, great work.
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