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Stone Heart
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 10:03:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Stone heart
Pushes away
All that would
Stand near
Lost soul
Walks alone
Looking for
Spirits release
Inward motion
Only hope
To free
Self worth
No ones
Forgotten
None left
Behind
When dances
Once more
On wind
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2009-01-08 22:03:57]
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Re: Stone Heart
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 10:16:54 PM AEST
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Oh sis I so relate. This is so vivid in emotion.
We all shall dance free on the wind.
Beautiful, bitter-sweet moment here.
Hugs and I so so love you
Michelle |
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Re: Stone Heart
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by Loende on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 11:43:11 PM AEST
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YEP.
I feel you there.
This is a great little write that speaks VOLUMES. Terrific job.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Stone Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 12:09:13 AM AEST
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very emotional, and very familiar to me I like it very much
thanks,
regards
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Re: Stone Heart
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 04:50:03 AM AEST
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My dear friend, let us dance together..
God bless.. Wish you happy new year..:-) venkat |
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Re: Stone Heart
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by karoody on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 03:17:52 PM AEST
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If I ever have a choice in this
you will never walk truly alone
for sure, your soul cannot be forgotten
Love Smiles and Hugs to you and yours Always
Kara
PS~A very enjoyable read, I loved the language and flow you used... |
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Re: Stone Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 09:25:49 PM AEST
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What I get out of this, and yup, I've been known to be wrong, is the first two stanza being very sad. Cold hearted people who don't know a good thing when they see it. :-(
But in your unique way, it seems to capture a bit of hope and uplifting spirit as it nears the end. Nicely done.
Thank you,
Tim |
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