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An Instance of Love
Contributed by
beefybeebuzz
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Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 05:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw you once, through a thick crowd.
Their movements, fast, their voices, loud.
To me, they all, were just a blur.
But something unexpected was about to occur.
You turned around, and in a heartbeat,
I saw your face, breathetaking, and sweet.
I locked a gaze, with your glittering eyes, and what came next, was by surprise.
You looked at me, and made a smile, that lasted forever, but it was only a while.
My body went numb, and my mind did too, but with all my will, i kept looking at you.
What i saw in you, was an angel's light, that made me feel, so safe, and so right.
This moment, that was a second long, stayed with me forever.
And i hope you will too, and it will be my endeavor.
Jennifer, a name to remember.
The love of my life, whom i met in September.
I wish you to be, my first and my last, i want you to be my future and past.
I love you so much, and it's not even new, ever since we first met, i have always
loved you. You make my life whole, and i think it's a sign, that we were meant to be,
and you'll always be mine...I Love You Jennifer.
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Re: An Instance of Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th January 2009 @ 07:07:18 PM AEST
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a very touching, sweet write. it's like a fairytale romance really. great work.
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Re: An Instance of Love
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by Puppy on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:22:53 AM AEST
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i love the way you describe the first time you saw each other! it was just like how i felt when saw that special someone!
Puppy :) |
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