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What's Real
Contributed by
moir3241
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Saturday, 10th January 2009 @ 11:21:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When will you understand
That I cant get you off my mind.
Weve tried to live our lives apart
But theres no one that compares with you.
Ive memorized your smile
And the creases of your eyes,
Dont make me start with someone else,
I know that theyre not worth my time.
Lets give us one more shot
Another chance at happiness
Ive wanted you all this time
Cant you see we have whats real;
The real thing,
It's meant for only us.
Our story's barely started
I wont settle for an another unhappy ending;
So dont say that youre leaving
And wed be better off alone.
Why can't you see it when I can sense it-
Why can't you feel it when I have no doubt-
Theres no turning back our time is running out.
Let's give us one more shot
Another chance at happiness
Ive wanted you all this time
Cant you see we have whats real;
The real thing,
It's meant for only us.
Youre tearing me apart,
All I need is one more kiss-
Maybe then youll finally see,
How perfect we could be.
Now the rest is up to you,
If you have it in your heart
Reach for my hand and I'll be yours.
Copyright ©
moir3241
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2009-01-10 23:21:06]
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Re: What's Real
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 04:37:11 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this many years ago. I felt this way. Over time though it seems that it wasn't what I needed and wanted and found happiness with someone else. But I know it is how many feel . Great job. |
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Re: What's Real
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by Puppy on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 03:18:58 AM AEST
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there is so much emotion! i can really relate to this one as i still would like to be the one i lost! Great write!
Puppy :) |
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