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Wrong Guy
Contributed by
Daydreamer
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Yes I like to flirt
Thats no reason to treat me like dirt
I still have feelings, I still hurt
Just cause you don't see me crying
That doesn't give you the right to stop trying
You don't have to hang me up and leave me drying
Just cause I don't believe in love
Because I have a hard time trusting even in a dove
It gives you no right to hold yourself above
As always I stand face to face with the truth
I sat with you and let you feel me with lies in the booth
The reason I don't cry for you and yern for you to sooth
Is because I never bought into your lies
I didn't care about how big the lies got in size
You will never get a single tear from these eyes
I don't need you to be strong
I don't need you to dedicate a song
I don't need you to act like King Kong
You don't make up who I am
I am not your kinda gem
Copyright ©
Daydreamer
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2003-03-22 14:25:00]
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Re: Wrong Guy
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 09:56:50 PM AEST
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| a very sincere heartfelt write, welcome to ypdc too:) |
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Re: Wrong Guy
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by Daydreamer on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 10:10:38 PM AEST
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| thank you for your comment. Thanks for welcoming me here. :) |
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Re: Wrong Guy
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by InteruptedFate on
Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 02:27:08 PM AEST
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| your a very strong person. good write. |
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Re: Wrong Guy
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by EternitysLyre on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 03:00:32 AM AEST
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| That man is a jerk. But the poem rather resembles a song, meaning it has incoherent rythm for regular poetry. It's unique, nothing wrong with that. Give it a tune and it'll be fantastic. |
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