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Heaven Shunned
Contributed by
thedarkpoet
on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 09:24:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Slender beams of moonlight enter
this darkened chamber as I kneel,
always a slave, always alone,
frozen here,
waiting.
Tortured forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
penetrating my darkened eyes.
Blood on a child's face.
I raise my head, now submitting to
this oblivious darkness.
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2009-01-11 21:24:54]
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Re: Heaven Shunned
(User Rating: 1 )
by GloomyBlu on
Sunday, 16th June 2013 @ 08:24:47 AM AEST
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| the imagery is pretty good but i don't seem to understand where you were going with it. |
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Re: Heaven Shunned
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by tawakwan on
Monday, 8th July 2013 @ 01:26:12 PM AEST
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| Forgive if me I am wrong,but the words seem to dictate abuse. If this is so,it's good,but needs to be worked on just a little. |
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