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Naked
Contributed by
george
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Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:26:21 AM in AEST
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I saw you standing naked,
wearing nothing but a smile
and I have to hand it to you
you really have some style
Ok the breasts are sagging now
and you have a double chin,
there`s an extra roll around the waist
but you could always hold that in
The skins not quite so taunt now
There`s a few grey pubic curls
but as I look in the mirror now
I think I still got it girls!
Copyright ©
george
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2002-07-31 06:26:21]
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Re: Naked
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:31:56 AM AEST
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Hang in there, George!! It could get worse!!! Enjoyed this..
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Re: Naked
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 07:09:17 AM AEST
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Still giggling! Loved this George.
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Re: Naked
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by Brooke on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 11:36:03 AM AEST
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I also am laughing that this wonderful poem...Keep it up george.
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Re: Naked
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by ginsdance on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 01:19:11 PM AEST
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ROFL.... this was great! Keep up the good writing George... and hey... at least you have great self-esteem!!!
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Re: Naked
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 07:20:43 AM AEST
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| Although I probably can't relate for another 15 years or so... I still love this poem... brought a big smile to my face... thanx |
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Re: Naked
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 04:07:00 PM AEST
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| great write George and so glad to see someone that is game enough to write about there nakedness i go naked around my house all the time well done George |
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