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Darkness Bound
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 04:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Here in a room
Black as night
Nothing to see
Nothing in sight
Notes on the piano
Never seemed so pure
Now I know
Now I am sure
I am falling into this darkness
By every note I play
All I want to hear
Is what you've got to say
For in this darkness
I pretend you're in the room
A desire I have
To see you someday soon
I can't understand
How all of this started
But all other emotions
Seem like they have been parted
For they are no match
To what I now feel
The thought of it all
Seems so real
If you were only here
In this dark room with me
To hear my notes
Then you would see
That my desire is burning
And my soul melting from the heat
For some reason
You put my heart back on beat
So here I am
Darkness bound
Just sitting in the dark
Waiting to be found
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butterflyperfect
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2009-01-12 16:54:05]
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Re: Darkness Bound
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by jessb3 on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 05:18:12 PM AEST
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| Wow...this is a beautiful poem! Great work! :o) |
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Re: Darkness Bound
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by spanky on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 06:36:49 PM AEST
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| Ever consider taking a course in Creative Writing? You would benefit from it greatly. |
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Re: Darkness Bound
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by karoody on
Monday, 12th January 2009 @ 07:05:50 PM AEST
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Spell-bounding and beautiful!
I loved this write from you!
Smiles and Blessings to you
Kara |
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Re: Darkness Bound
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by Puppy on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 05:08:44 AM AEST
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beautiful write...
Puppy :) |
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Re: Darkness Bound
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 01:22:17 PM AEST
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it was a very passionate and heartfelt write. i could see you in the room with the piano, waiting. i particularly enjoyed the final 2 stanzas, they were like the climactic crescendo to the symphony that came before it. great writing.
-phil |
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