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Busy right now
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 04:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Busy right now
don't know what to do right now
I need some free time
I'm losing my mind
I have to much on my plate
I can't handle this
I don't want to quit and be hated
but I want to live in bliss
I'm busy right now
So I have no time to write
That's why I need some time
To come up with a better rhyme
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-01-13 16:37:42]
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Re: Busy right now
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by spanky on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 06:40:06 PM AEST
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Egad! What a terrible poem!
My poetry is much better::
Bang One Out, Mama!
I thought I heard you calling me
Inside my broken shoe.
I answered, "Here...I'm over here-"
(so happy it was you).
I thought I felt you kissing me
Inside my runny nose.
I answered, "You're a snotty thing,
And everybody knows!"
And then I heard you passing gas.
You laughed, then banged one out-
I swear to gawd, I thought I'd die-
It smelled like saurkraut!
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Re: Busy right now
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 07:51:44 PM AEST
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though busy thanks for taking time to post this write.
Always for a minute for the writing.
( as far as little spanky) this little idiot is looking for attention ignore it it may go away ROFLMAO it is a total *****)
Again I loved the poem
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Michelle |
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