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The Sweetest Lullaby
Contributed by
kellsey17
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Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 05:11:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ive searched for you my whole lifebut you were here and gone so fast you never gave me a chance to show you a part of me, the part that aches for you, the part that while your away is lost so much its like searching for one certain rain drop in a downpour, I wont be complete until your back with me. this is something much more than a need, its indescribable my heart skips a beat and my breathing slows when I hear your soft voice like the sweetest lullaby comforting me as I drift into sleep it calms me and the moment it does I Know everything is going to be alright
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Re: The Sweetest Lullaby
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by gmcse8 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 10:07:40 AM AEST
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Nice write. I especially enjoyed some of your phrasing. The phrase "searching for one certain rain drop in a downpour" was amazing. I look forward to more of your writings. Wonderful, really wonderful.
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