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The Ociean
Contributed by
EcuaOrgullo310
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Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 04:29:54 PM in AEST
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In the ocean you spent you life.
Now that same ocean bears my strife.
Time has past and I know you're gone.
But forever, with me, you memory lives on.
In the ocean, you loved to be near.
But Now that ocean bears my tears.
I'll never forget every kiss and every bear hug.
Reminiscing on these memores gives my heart a tug.
You left behind those that loved you.
You even left behind a little one that didn't know you.
If you were here now, you would have been a great daddy.
I'm wish your life wasn't snatched from us so sadly.
You were a great Uncle, Brother, Father and friend.
Your memory will live on till the very end.
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EcuaOrgullo310
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2009-01-20 16:29:54]
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Re: The Ociean
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 08:05:08 PM AEST
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It was very good. You know, I love the line about the ocean holding your tears, that's really good.
Take care, my love
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Re: The Ociean
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 11:27:12 PM AEST
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Touching tribute to your uncle. I am sorry for your loss.
The ocean holding your tears...... heart wrenching but beautiful.
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