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Gentle Touches
Contributed by
aaron8124
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Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 04:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A dark room. Only soft ambient light from lit candles. Gentle touches... my fingers mindlessly tracing patterns up and down your chest. I glance upwards to stare into your eyes. A gaze so quiet, I can hear your heart pounding. Our eyes shut, and our lips touch. No longer do I feel so insignificant.
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Re: Gentle Touches
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by Incognito_Bombastus on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 04:53:48 PM AEST
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A lucky boy. You have captured a perfect moment with depth & feeling.
Thank you I.B. |
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Re: Gentle Touches
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by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 08:41:25 PM AEST
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I love the feeling and detail..
I can totally see the emotions and feelings you were having.
I can picture myself in your situation because of the detail you used.
Very nice. |
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Re: Gentle Touches
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by moir3241 on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 08:37:33 AM AEST
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That was beautiful;
short, sweet and full of emotion.
Keep up the writing. |
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Re: Gentle Touches
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by elle on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 03:07:04 PM AEST
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| true & gentle crafting of intimacys' delight. . . peace. elle |
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