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Driving Home
Contributed by
ari
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Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 10:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Driving home alone on that lonely highway
Water makes it hard to see
The sky is clear and blue
That water is coming from me
I should have never told you how I felt
You'd never even seemed to care
That when I looked into your eyes
The only thing I could do was stare
Like the saying goes
A broken heart still feels bad
Even when you ain't got half
Of what you thought you had
So I am driving home again tonight
And the worst part about my sorrow
Is that I need to drive along the highway
To get back home, again, tomorrow
Copyright ©
ari
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2009-01-23 22:42:06]
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Re: Driving Home
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:42:37 AM AEST
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awesome, i like it very much.....
keep |
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Re: Driving Home
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by anomalei on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 05:09:41 PM AEST
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i love this!
good write.
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Re: Driving Home
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 06:21:21 PM AEST
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Really enjoyed how this flowed.
I was particularly struck by the last 4 lines which seem to emphasise the circle of frustration !!
Great piece
Steve |
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