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Stay My Friend..
Contributed by
dilrubay
on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:24:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Stay My Friend
the night lark
sings
offering her heart.
reclining moon,
as if, a half-lit kerosene lamp
dangles,
drenched in ceaseless pain
pining,
warmth of
a distant
last star of the night..
stay my friend, the night is yet to end
Searing my being, my heart, the soul
searches in eternal vain
unexplained questions of my
distressed mind..
as though stray birds, yearning
to take wings
across the vast blue
of ever receding horizon
the unknown quest..
Elusive
fire-flies in the mist
my inner being, the farthest
recess of my mind reaches
to possess what is unreal
an enigmatic, mystifying end..
your final embrace,
dimpled smile, your anguished tears
it etches
one more writhing pain
to the story of my life..
stay, stay my friend
this night
till the last lingering flicker
of the lamp ends..
Copyright ©
dilrubay
... [
2009-01-24 00:24:36]
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Re: Stay My Friend..
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by moumita on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 11:09:15 AM AEST
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nothing is there to come , and
nothing past , but an eternal
now does always last !
hope the night will over
and new sun will rise
with new hope n joy .
very nice poem .
thnx a lot aapu .
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Re: Stay My Friend..
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by elle on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:26:38 PM AEST
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| I agree, very nice. I love the ending. peace. elle |
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Re: Stay My Friend..
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 05:52:03 PM AEST
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There was an atmospheric and soothing quality about this, it all knitted together perfectly.
Thanks for sharing
Steve |
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Re: Stay My Friend..
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 09:14:56 AM AEST
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the imagery was world class. it was a joy to read.
the night lark
sings
offering her heart.
reclining moon,
as if, a half-lit kerosene lamp
dangles,
i loved this bit, wonderful.
-phil |
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Re: Stay My Friend..
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by shuronjona on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 11:38:50 PM AEST
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oshadharon. apurbaaa.
mone pore oi ganti, na, jeyona,
rajani ekhono baki.......
onek sundar hoyeche.
oneeeek shafollo kamona korchi.
bokulbalaaaa love u very much. |
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Re: Stay My Friend..
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by shuronjona on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 11:39:33 PM AEST
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oshadharon. apurbaaa.
mone pore oi ganti, na, jeyona,
rajani ekhono baki.......
onek sundar hoyeche.
oneeeek shafollo kamona korchi.
bokulbalaaaa love u very much. |
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