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Loving still?
Contributed by
shelby
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Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:35:19 PM in AEST
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A warmth in the chill of winter,
smile to hide the shame.
Gathering thoughts adrift.
Loving should not be this way.
Open the heart with trust.
Titles are not what one needs.
Somewhere in the mix,
money and greed comes before it.
Kindred the spirit in mist.
Vapor that carries all away.
When do we decide
it is time to give or push it away?
Love should not be with condition.
Hearts bared and open to all.
Like the tree bare of leaf
on a frozen winters day.
No in between either or,
it needs to be true all around.
If we cannot come together
then all concerned is hell ward bound.
Breath of frost on the air,
tears will fall once more.
Death to the thought and what ifs
it is just what it has become.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-01-25 22:35:19]
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Re: Loving still?
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:50:53 PM AEST
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Sad girl but oh so true.
Hang tuff, my friend.
wuvs ya,
emy |
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Re: Loving still?
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 11:47:47 PM AEST
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I concur with Miss Elle.... But I have saying... Doesnt bother me my heart is filled with sadness...just means that I desire happiness. ;o)
Excellent write my friend.
~Bin~ |
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Re: Loving still?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 02:16:32 AM AEST
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Son of a censored!!!! I could not have said it better. Damn straight, Love should not be with condition . There are a few people I would like you to talk to, Michelle. They need to hear your words of wisdom.
Excellent, excellent, write. Oh, and did I mention this was an excellent write?
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Loving still?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 04:30:19 PM AEST
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| This poem is so true, love should be unconditional not conditional. However it seems only animals understand that kind of love! Great write! |
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