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Let me drown
Contributed by
Soza
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Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 01:18:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Faces, they tell me what to do,
Traces of the path lead me to,
Places, I never been to,
Tears, they roll down from my cheeks,
Fears, you can see they are making me weak,
Years have passed away as the clock ticks,
Time, they say it doesnt wait for anybody,
While people say im just so lucky,
Lies, you are changed and a somebody,
Dont you see its in my eyes,
Cant you see others are so wise,
When will we get rid of all these lies,
Still i hope our love never dies,
Cant you feel it in your soul,
There's a lot more than this that i should know,
Do you ever think about everything but your vow,
You know nothing about how i feel, so,
Let me drown in your memories that I own,
I gear up the courage to pick up the phone,
Just wanna tell you I feel so alone,
Dial up your number and think about the feeling unknown,
Let me drown your memories that I own
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Soza
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2009-01-26 01:18:37]
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Re: Let me drown
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by Kayden on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 12:47:15 PM AEST
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| I'm not sure I would have catagorized this as Love poetry as much as grief... This really instilled the feelings in which you were feeling in me. Good write, but im sorry that you wrote it and feel this way. |
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